Katherine, I came to see you for a Career Counselling session and also for you to review (critique) my Resume and provide me with some feedback. 

Truth be told, I had spoken to a lot of other professionals, listened to their feedback and done a lot of work on my Resume before I came to see you and thought it only needed a tweak here and there. 

However, after the Resume Critique I realised there is a lot more work to do and I look forward to this challenged based on the information you provided me.

Whilst you offered to rewrite my Resume for me, I would like to give it a go myself, and then, when I have completed this, I would like to ask for your feedback again – if that is OK. 

Thank you for your detailed insights and feedback. I will see you in a couple of weeks.

Blu Ripples Career Counselling and Resume Review Testimonial, Whitebridge, Newcastle NSW